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Jammin with Charlie (8-Bit Remix)

whitedevil5000

Active Member
From one musician to another, some things I think it needs:

1. Some elements to make it more interesting. Why would someone listen through the entire song? Would they listen to it again. Make it change and keep it building. Kinda like intro, build build build build, outro type thing.
2. Not so repetitive. But yet, keep it repetitive. With the style of music your doing, listen to some EDM music.
3. Maybe add a key change for interest sake. That might be cool.

But well done! Sounds good!
 

TheCakeGod

Trusted Member
whitedevil5000 said:
From one musician to another, some things I think it needs:

1. Some elements to make it more interesting. Why would someone listen through the entire song? Would they listen to it again. Make it change and keep it building. Kinda like intro, build build build build, outro type thing.
2. Not so repetitive. But yet, keep it repetitive. With the style of music your doing, listen to some EDM music.
3. Maybe add a key change for interest sake. That might be cool.

But well done! Sounds good!
I was also thinking the same thing. When I am either making a song for my cello or just learning a new song #2 & #3 are important, but #1 is the most important(if I'm the one writing the song).
 

whitedevil5000

Active Member
200315844 said:
whitedevil5000 said:
From one musician to another, some things I think it needs:

1. Some elements to make it more interesting. Why would someone listen through the entire song? Would they listen to it again. Make it change and keep it building. Kinda like intro, build build build build, outro type thing.
2. Not so repetitive. But yet, keep it repetitive. With the style of music your doing, listen to some EDM music.
3. Maybe add a key change for interest sake. That might be cool.

But well done! Sounds good!
I was also thinking the same thing. When I am either making a song for my cello or just learning a new song #2 & #3 are important, but #1 is the most important(if I'm the one writing the song).

Ah, you play cello? Do you play any other instrument?
 
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