I like the smoothness of the terrain, it really lends a good feel to the map. While you did add color, I would really love to see a lot more of it. My first thought when seeing the thread title was "Oh sweet! A mesa canyon parkour would be really cool." However, I was a bit surprised to see only two or three strips of color in the terrain, where I was expecting to see browns and yellows and reds and white, with maybe some red sand thrown in for texture (I believe
iiJam mentioned texture in his post in the other thread). I like the length, it certainly seems long enough but yet not too long. Some of the jumps you added seem a bit difficult, considering the idea started that you wanted an easier parkour.
I also think that the ending may have to be somewhere else than the helicopter, seeing as the command blocks would be visible were it in the helicopter.
I like this version better than the original, and the parkour itself seems fine. However the surrounding terrain needs work as it is currently still quite monotonous. I'm sorry, but this map has been declined. If you wish to make improvements you can just post them in this thread, there is no need for three threads on the same parkour