MC_ProYT made some good points.
The parkour is way too
suort. I think we need a few more easier parkours for beginners, but they should still be decent in size. like
iTut said, i also prefer parkours that take you on a journey, I was really hoping that at the end, when you jumped into the hole in the wall, you'd then enter another room.
I really like the bottom of the parkour. It is well detailed, and I appreciate that you incorporated the tree into the parkour.
And I'd suggest changing the name. When I saw 'waterfall' parkour, I expected... More water. You know?
As for the rest of the parkour,
You were obviously going with an oak theme for the jumps, but it seems really bland. And the fact that most of the jumps are similar, will make this map way too short. Take Dreams or Rainbow parkour for example, they use a bunch of different jump types.
This map has allot of potential, so if you really feel up to it, it'd suggest changing the main block that you jump on (from oak wood planks) to something more appealing to the eyes, as well as mixing in other blocks that look good together, adding more types of parkour (cobble wall, fence, ect) and Expanding! It needs to be allot bigger.
So for now, I'm sorry to say, but this map has been declined.