Parkour Slime Parkour (Re-made)

[xoSammy]

Presenting Slime Parkour By: SamThePugMC
Difficulty: Normal/Hard
Length: Medium
Checkpoints: 5
Icon: Slime Block
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I didn't have any ideas for the floor, so I just made it the same as the walls. xD
Hopefully the majority of it is much better than the last one. =P

 

[Trenly]

Loterally it looks like you just added a variation of colors. Still a bit bland imo.

 

[MeltWood]

This actually looks way better to me, good job! I think that the iron/glass/quartz walls look strange though. Make them the same color theme as the rest of it, like brown stained glass, logs instead of iron, brown clay instead of quartz etc.

After that, like Trenly said, you should add some decorations and things to look at besides a square tunnel. People will notice the amount of time you put into these maps, I promise.

 

[xoSammy]

This actually looks way better to me, good job! I think that the iron/glass/quartz walls look strange though. Make them the same color theme as the rest of it, like brown stained glass, logs instead of iron, brown clay instead of quartz etc.

After that, like Trenly said, you should add some decorations and things to look at besides a square tunnel. People will notice the amount of time you put into these maps, I promise.

Thanks so much! I may add things on the ceiling that could potentially be 3D instead of all of the 2D walls and ceilings. So maybe some lumps of different blocks on the ceiling, I think that will look cool. I did think that the walls with the iron and quartz looked out of place, so I will change those and maybe have brown and black stained glass instead with stained clay too. I'm away for a week now, so I won't be able to work on it for a while. But when I get back, if this one is denied, I will definitely keep with this Parkour and improve it more and more to what people suggest and mention. =)

 

[iiJam]

It does look better then the previous submission, but it still lacks detail. Although there is now texture, the walls are still flat (No depth) and the brown and white don't contrast extremely well.
Not many changes were made, so my decision stays the same,
sorry.