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Creative Mansion

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Jacky708

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This is my mansion in progress. Feedback will be appreciated :D
 

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__USA__

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I do like it. While I am not a very talented builder, I think (in my own opinion) that it would look a little nicer if the entire house wasn't consisting of the exact same block, maybe make the roof out of stone brick stairs? But that's just how I feel. Good job.
 

Jacky708

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I do like it. While I am not a very talented builder, I think (in my own opinion) that it would look a little nicer if the entire house wasn't consisting of the exact same block, maybe make the roof out of stone brick stairs? But that's just how I feel. Good job.
Thank you for your feedback that really helped :)
 

Nacnudd

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The way you structured the exterior and interior layout is fantastic. There is plenty of room and you strategically placed items to make it feel more full, but it still seems like it is seriously lacking in identity. You need to add some more filler(this is different than detail Kaios). It doesn't matter if it is also made out of the same blocks, although I would recommend others. You just need to remove the sense of emptiness in the 2 vast rooms you currently have. And if anything specialize the roof. Other than the details, this looks like it took a while and you've done a fantastic job.
 

Jacky708

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The way you structured the exterior and interior layout is fantastic. There is plenty of room and you strategically placed items to make it feel more full, but it still seems like it is seriously lacking in identity. You need to add some more filler(this is different than detail Kaios). It doesn't matter if it is also made out of the same blocks, although I would recommend others. You just need to remove the sense of emptiness in the 2 vast rooms you currently have. And if anything specialize the roof. Other than the details, this looks like it took a while and you've done a fantastic job.
Thank you so much for that fantastic feedback, I am currently working on the mansion so your feedback defiantly helped me in this situation. :)
 

Kaios

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You need to add some more filler(this is different than detail Kaios).
Bruh for real.....b4 you go rippin people be sure you know what they were talkin about. I didn't even look at the mansion I was just correcting my friend....as a joke. So calm teh salt.
 

_Bach_

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Again, please dont revive dead topics. Anything that hasnt been posted on in 7 days is dead.

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