Parkour Dungeon Parkour 9 (resubmitted)

[ChildMusher69]

This parkour features a huge room with a rectangular base, and an arched roof. Three pillars come up from the sides, with leaves hanging down them. New stuff: Leaves are now hanging down from the wall, and the ceiling, and leaves now have cobwebs on them. There is also a platform, supported by two pillars, and a pool of lava. There are two holes in the platform, where lava flows down. It is on my 26th plot. Many people didn't want it to replace dungeon parkour 8, so I just put it as dungeon parkour 9.

Name: Dungeon Parkour 9
Difficulty: Extremely hard
Length: Medium
Checkpoints: 2

Rage warning: If this map gets accepted, watch out for raging people on parkour.

Big thanks to these builders who helped me make it:
• TheMightyBrennen
• TheRealFishhy

Here are some screenshots.

 

[Viperstrike]

If it's very very hard maybe add more check points

 

[Trenly]

Again, I don't think that the builders credits at the end fit in with any of the other dungeons.

Personally, I do not feel that we need any more dungeon parkours. Overall, I do not care for it. Also, none of the other dungeons have leaves, or cobwebs.

 

[Viperstrike]

Again, I don't think that the builders credits at the end fit in with any of the other dungeons.

Personally, I do not feel that we need any more dungeon parkours. Overall, I do not care for it. Also, none of the other dungeons have leaves, or cobwebs.

And, do they have to have every thing and only the other things that the other dungeon parkours have??? No I like the leaves and the cobwebs. It makes it looks more dungeoney

 

[Trenly]

And, do they have to have every thing and only the other things that the other dungeon parkours have??? No I like the leaves and the cobwebs. It makes it looks more dungeoney

I was simply stating my opinion, no need to get defensive

 

[Viperstrike]

I was simply stating my opinion, no need to get defensive

Yes but your opinion is mostly against every thing I don't think I can recall your ever not saying some thing negative about a map.

 

[ChildMusher69]

Yes but your opinion is mostly against every thing I don't think I can recall your ever not saying some thing negative about a map.

Ikr viper

 

[Trenly]

Yes but your opinion is mostly against every thing I don't think I can recall your ever not saying some thing negative about a map.

Every map has flaws, and I point out the ones I find obvious. Though I do critique quite heavily I don't always have bad things to say. Also, as a builder, I would feel that my critiques are not without a point.

To me it seems a bit small. That may be because of the pond and such in the center though. I like that it's detailed, but I think a larger or more wide open area would be better suited for Mob Arena.

Although this could make a really good 1v1 arena imo

 

[iiJam]

Yes but your opinion is mostly against every thing I don't think I can recall your ever not saying some thing negative about a map.

I'd stop if I were you.


As for the map:
I do agree with Trenly. Why make another dungeon parkour when we already have 8 of them? We would much rather prefer a new, original map.
The cobwebs don't look too good in my opinion. But that just might be because they aren't in any of the other dungeon maps and I'm not used to it.
But the walls are still way too flat! They need more depth. Maybe some leaves and stairs as well.
I'm sorry, but this map has been declined.

 

[Viperstrike]

I'd stop if I were you.


As for the map:
I do agree with Trenly. Why make another dungeon parkour when we already have 8 of them? We would much rather prefer a new, original map.
The cobwebs don't look too good in my opinion. But that just might be because they aren't in any of the other dungeon maps and I'm not used to it.
But the walls are still way too flat! They need more depth. Maybe some leaves and stairs as well.
I'm sorry, but this map has been declined.

Every map has flaws, and I point out the ones I find obvious. Though I do critique quite heavily I don't always have bad things to say. Also, as a builder, I would feel that my critiques are not without a point.

And I was stating my opinion as well

 

[Zelistra]

And I was stating my opinion as well

Sometimes you can stop after stating your opinion a few times

 

[Xx_PoppyCorn_xX]

Please add it <3 we need more dungeons

 

[MistTheSnitch]

Please add it <3 we need more dungeons

It's already been declined... And 8 dungeon parkours isn't enough?

 

[Xx_PoppyCorn_xX]

It's already been declined... And 8 dungeon parkours isn't enough?

Nah, I love new things

 

[iiJam]

Please add it <3 we need more dungeons

Why make another dungeon parkour when we already have 8 of them? We would much rather prefer a new, original map.

 

[Viperstrike]

I do agree that we do not need anouther ok maybe some more original maps!