A few things: first, the starting room is small and bland imo. It's just a box with some cobwebs. I really do not like the banners covering the doorway. It would be much better if you started in the snowy entrance to the house. And there too, the walls are a bit bland. I would appreciate more depth than just 1 or two layers of blocks, although I do realize you have limited space with your plot. You can skip part of the parkour by going up the steps and onto the tree. Its a small portion, but still. Also, the main room looks like a box with a few paintings, some carpet, a fireplace and a tree. The gifts just hanging on the walls do not seem very realistic to me. And again with the banners on the door. I don't really like the hallway. Its too short. 3 jumps and into another bannered door. Not to mention that that too is just a box made of coal, with a few redstone torches. Next there is the banner maze. To me it just seems poorly made. Especially since you just have to walk forward, basically. I don't understand the little room after it, and the accaia is a really weird texture. After that is the candy cane. the candy cane itself is ok, but I
really don't like the use of netherrack there. Expecially since the walls again, have no texture. The room it leads into is just plain weird and looks messy. Following that, the outdoor snowy part is halfway decent, but I don't like that the stone is just floating. Also, the walls should be more than going straight down, give them depth!!! The underground section again makes no sense and is plain weird. Its also just a box with cobwebs and vines and only one block choice. The next banner maze is also bad, I will save you the details as they are almost the same as before. Then there is the final room. Again, just really plain walls made with one block, no texture, and the decorations dont hide that fact. The floor is just coal, with a lava river though the middle. Jam actually brought up my final point last time.
AND in the last room... You need to test a parkour thoroughly before posting.
You can just walk on the coal blocks over to the pumpkin and then jump onto the clay. You need to test it to make sure there aren't places like that.
Tl;dr?
- The banners are ugly
- The rooms are almost all cubes made of one block and look bad
- Things just look weird
- Your block choice changes a lot. The palette makes very little sense in some areas
- It lacks depth and detail
