Parkour Clay Parkour

[BecomingIssie]

Hi! I have made a parkour map on my second plot. To get there, do /p v IssieThePugMC 2 and fly up to the second layer.

If my map gets accepted. Can it be on the Void and the entrance that is there when you fly up, could you close that. ElegantSilence helped a little with the jumps but not much.

Name: Clay Parkour
Difficulty: Medium
Length: Medium
Checkpoints: 7

I am open for suggestions!

 

[Tuut]

Please don't write the comments like 'rubbish' and stuff. It was just a map I suggested maybe we could add! Thanks xx

If you can't accept critique then don't post maps.

 

[touh]

If you can't accept critique then don't post maps.

She deleted it xd

 

[MC_ProYT]

honestly, i dont like it.
1. contains very little detail..
2. seems like clouds parkour + dreams parkour
3. Im pretty sure that jam said that if u make a parkour that is plot sized and is just going around the plot and going up and up and up, then it is a lower chance of getting accepted! dreams got lucky..
4. the beginning is medium, the middle is extremely easy, the end is very hard

 

[ParadoxTaco]

honestly, i dont like it.
1. contains very little detail..
2. seems like clouds parkour + dreams parkour
3. Im pretty sure that jam said that if u make a parkour that is plot sized and is just going around the plot and going up and up and up, then it is a lower chance of getting accepted! dreams got lucky..
4. the beginning is medium, the middle is extremely easy, the end is very hard

But Mc, what is the median of Hard and Easy? medium... I learned that in science when I talked about Columbus. But yeah, the map could use work.

 

[BecomingIssie]

Ok. What type of work?

 

[iiJam]

I agree with Mc_pro, this reminds me of Dreams parkour (the two stained glass rainbow things, and the type of Steined glass pane jumps)
The parkour seems crammed. The Thing about clouds parkour is that it isn't restricted to the box shape of the plots.
And if this parkour was surrounded by the void, don't you think the floating start and end rooms would look stenge and out of place?
The theme is good. And it defiantly has potential, but this map is just lacking detail.
So I'm sorry to say, but this map has been declined.

 

[BecomingIssie]

Ok thanks! Please can someone remove this thread?

 

[Trenly]

Ok thanks! Please can someone remove this thread?

No. There is no reason for it to be deleted